Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Poor Navi

EDIT: Realized the only image with the deku scrub girl was the UI mockup a few pages back so I added her here.
Pretty surprising results so far, I must say. They were all pretty neck and neck for the first 20 votes or so and now the keese girl (who didn't do so well in the last two polls) is giving Saria a run for her money. Some of you Navi voters have a thing for small girls with wings, eh?

UPDATE: Poll posted.
One anon suggested I should stick queen gohma in here because she's a little more curvy than the others. I doubt she's really anyone's cup of tea, but she does add some variety.


This was not very fun to color.
 I'll post queen gohma and put up another poll soon. This one will not have Navi in it, which pretty much means its going to be Saria next, but we'll see how it turns out...
On a side note, /f/dude is alive. It seems it was more than just his job giving him a hard time.




Since coloring is taking me longer than I thought, I'll post the lineart here just to have some sort of update.

EDIT: There seems to be a few comments that are being sent, but don't actually show up in the comments section.  You may want to play it safe and copy your post before publishing.

48 comments:

  1. I don't think anyone likes Navi.

    I think the Gohma Larva would be a great chance for more of a gang bang, a plethora of those little buggers. You could put more of a focus on anal here but it would work better as multiple penetration.

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    1. Navi happens to be our writer's favorite OoT character.

      Keep in mind Gohma Larva aren't little in Navi's case. They're much, much bigger than she is (I even went to compare their sizes in game). Still weighing my options though.

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    2. You talking shit about mai waifu bro?

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    3. You must be a masochist to like Navi.

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  2. A suggestion for their genetalia:

    Make that little head spike they have into a dick, then the balls in between their legs. It'll be much more practical and give leeway for some better position, plus it's ridiculous, in a good way.

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  3. i agree with it being a gang bang, that sounds hot

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  4. Dislike? It's just because she looks the best so far

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    1. This^

      Besides Link.

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    2. In what sense compared to the others, quality or design? If its the former, hopefully that shouldn't be too much of a concern at this point... The quality of the sprite wouldn't have any affect on the quality of the scene.

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    3. Bit of both.

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  5. I think we should have a Saria scene next, if only for some variety.
    Deku Scrub would be good.

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    1. No, that was the whole point of the voting.

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    2. @anon1 There's a voting system for a reason. Don't be the guy who whines because he didn't get his way.

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    3. Navi won't be available in the next poll. I do have to consider some sort of balance between the characters. Potentially going through Navi three times in a row, is great for Navi, but it neglects the others. If I eventually go through all of those scenes I listed, then that wouldn't be a concern. However, there's no guarantee of that, so Saria and the monster girls will need their own time to shine.

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  6. I think there should be some anal in this scene, whether you go with the gang bang idea suggested earlier or not.

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    1. I think I will attempt to go with a gangbang. With the composition I have in mind, anal shouldn't be a problem as a variation either. Hope it works out.

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  7. Is the Picture gonna be an Animation or a Still Picture

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    1. Still picture
      More animations are unlikely at this point until we figure out what happened to /f/dude.

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    2. Well, he did quit his earlier project without saying anything...

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    3. He quit a lot of things without saying anything.

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  8. Looks good, i like it. Though it's still way too rough to offer criticism.

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  9. I like the composition but it's difficult to see everything.

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  10. When are you going to update?

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  11. i like it, looks good

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  12. I actually don't see much wrong with this one.

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  13. Her right arm appears to be missing and her left is at a bit of an awkward angle, that's all i can really see wrong.

    Also my comment got deleted.

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    1. Thanks for pointing that out
      And yeah, its a weird situation with the comments. Hope it gets fixed soon.

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  14. Looking forward to seeing this updated.

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    1. Thanks. I've been pretty busy the past few days, sorry for not updating or responding.
      I hope to make some good progress on this tomorrow after work.

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    2. No problem, hoping to see that update soon though.

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  15. One day there will be an update. One day...

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    1. One day...
      I did work on it a bit these past two days. Coloring is just going slower than I would care to admit. I'll upload the lineart just to have something here.

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  16. It looks pretty great, the only thing i can offer when it comes to critique is that Navi seems more dazed than actually being raped. She looks more stoned than anything.

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    1. I agree with this. She needs tears, or something, to show that she is being raped.

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  17. Did a good job, her facial expression still doesn't look very extreme in comparison to the rape though.

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    1. Tried to go with "powerless" and "given up" this time, rather than shocked and screaming like with the keese.

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    2. Still needs more tears though either way.

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    3. I could emphasis the tears if that's all there is to it. There are some other small bits I'd like to clean up anyway.

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  18. I like how this turned out, except for what's already been mentioned, and you guys finally got in touch with /f/dude? That's good, I thought he quit again.

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  19. Can't blame you there.

    Seems his house was broken into.

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  20. this game is ready?

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  21. Saria with deku baba

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  22. this game is going to be paid or free?

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  23. I am Brazilian and am eager to play this game

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